Review Detail of Inferno_Vor in Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler
Review detail
[Chapter 38] Grammar is good. I didn't notice any mistakes or they are minor enough to make them forgettable. Update rate is great. I just hope the author doesn't get burned out. The story is progressing steadily and the author introduced some interesting changes. The only thing is the MC is OP so might not be for everyone. I generally like the characters, but they do feel kinda plain. I honestly prefer that since it makes the story less annoying to read and is a nice refreshment from those stories. And the characters aren't plain to the point of being dumb. The world has interesting changes with the inclusion of the MC and I can't wait to see what other changes the author will include. TL;DR The story is interesting and has a lot of potential, but it's not for everyone with the inclusion of some tags which I recommend you check. Overall I recommend giving it a go by finishing the MC's child arc(before he meets real Bibi Dong) because it's relatively short and gives an idea of what to expect.
Douluo Dalu: The Legend of Heavenly Ruler
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Poor_Wordsmith:Venerable Inferno_Vor, this young one asks for your guidance, Is the ****** thing happened??
Not for now, it's going slow atm, although there are developments between MC and bibi dong and qian renxue nothing major.
Man_of_culture_69:Is there r-18 scnes?
Inferno_Vor:Not for now, it's going slow atm, although there are developments between MC and bibi dong and qian renxue nothing major.
Inferno_Vor:Not for now, it's going slow atm, although there are developments between MC and bibi dong and qian renxue nothing major.
Inferno_Vor:Not for now, it's going slow atm, although there are developments between MC and bibi dong and qian renxue nothing major.
Unless you are paying an unordinary amount of attention to grammar it shouldn't affect reading experience, could also be you are an editor with very high level english. Cause I don't believe ordinary people will complain.
unknown_daoist:Grammar is good? i read the first 2 chapters and there are a lot of mistakes.... i was wondering bc a 5 star rating is pretty dam high.....(does the author delete reviews???)
I'm an ordinary reader, and i can say that the grammar is pretty bad. it's not the worst, but it could be much better if the writer paid more attention.
Inferno_Vor:Unless you are paying an unordinary amount of attention to grammar it shouldn't affect reading experience, could also be you are an editor with very high level english. Cause I don't believe ordinary people will complain.
I agree with daoist, many mistakes and there's no need to have "very high level english" to notice the mistakes. Still readable though.
Inferno_Vor:Unless you are paying an unordinary amount of attention to grammar it shouldn't affect reading experience, could also be you are an editor with very high level english. Cause I don't believe ordinary people will complain.
