There are many flaws. 1.It is MTL 2. I still don't know whether this is supposed to be western or eastern themed 3. Heartless MC uncaring of humans 4. Despite having SSS-grade, he is not much stronger than the top ranked 5. I stopped caring about the errors since it is MTL and nobody cares 6. Lack of world description, there are small stores and department stores, but there are many more useful things when they only rely on fast food and ready made for quick consumption 7. No world building,farming etc 8. Wiping out the rest of humanity so that only the MC's vicinity is relevant 9.MC not making use of all his resources 10.... I could probably find more issues
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