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Review Detail of Dreamstrafe in Doomsday: I Obtained A Fallen Angel Pet At The Start Of The Game

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Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv153yrDreamstrafe

there are tons of inconsistencies, with leveling of the character from one chapter to the next his level will reduce, the upgrade of his abilities being redacted, and tons of other inconsistencies. the world background is pretty interesting, and while mc is broken, it's not to the point of it no longer being interesting, tho that will entirely depend on how the story progresses in the future, haha what am I saying this novel if it's being translated by Wn definitely has no future. otherwise I might continue reading. i give it 2/5 stars. i wouldn't mind it being pretty weak in the categories i gave it, tho with how the story has progressed, and how interesting the world concept is even if it's still pretty basic, since it has room for improvement in the future, but if it's a translation, which I'm assuming since you usually get the inconsistencies I've mentioned from translated novels, maybe consider reading it elsewhere and see if it's any better or gets better later

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Doomsday: I Obtained A Fallen Angel Pet At The Start Of The Game

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FrozenAce
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it can't get better the author's account is deleted or at least not accessible but I don't believe they have private accounts on webnovel.

Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

oh well, the concept was alright, thanks for lett me know so I can remove it from my list!

FrozenAce:it can't get better the author's account is deleted or at least not accessible but I don't believe they have private accounts on webnovel.
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read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.