Review Detail of moonstonelee in After Mr. Pei Marries An Overweight Lady

The plot, so far is good. Characters and character development is also good. There were some instances that I was confused with the narration and sometimes the characters got mixed by the author...like instead of lin xiaoran it became lin suying and xiaqing's name became xiqing or xiaxia and instead of miss lin she was called mis xia qing but all this can be fixed with a bit of good editing. All in all I liked the novel and I'll be waiting for the next chapter. I hope it'll be soon! Many thanks to the author!