Review Detail of Wanga in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Pro's You can see the writing quality improving as the story continues MC can cultivate outside of the system Con's I noticed many inconsistencies in the story The story is in desperate need of more world development The system is an almost a non-existent part of the story Certain story points that are added for plot are illogical Qing Yi is a bully and seems completely ungrateful to her master - The story had great potential yet delivered an average story, however the writing has shown vast improvements as the story progresses. I still don't completely understand the reasoning behind Qing Yi having a complete personality change into the most annoying and hated character (by readers) in the story, but it is too late to change after the fact. Hopefully, she jumps ship to the other alchemist, as it would be congruent with her current personality. Overall, I look forward to the next story by the Author, as with their rate of improvement, it will likely be an exceptional work.