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Floating_Clouds
Floating_CloudsLv102yrFloating_Clouds

To be honest I like the story background but the inner writing I don't like it. Reading the first volume I think that the first disciple has no respect and gratitude for MC as her master, it's more like a casual respect not like a nascent soul stage cultivator master should have.

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Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

PurpleSpring

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PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthorPurpleSpring

Sad to see you didn't like it, just didn't want my novel to go down the line of something where the mc ends up just being arrogant and everyone praising him 24/7 for whatever he does, like in so many other cultivation novels... At the very least, webnovel has a lot of those stories around xD

Floating_Clouds
Floating_CloudsLv10Floating_Clouds

First thank you for taking my view into consideration. I am totally fine with MC character and even I don't want to see another of those arrogant MC but I think a master should get its rightful respect as someone who changed a person's life by that person. But don't give it too much thought as I know how difficult it is to write something just go as you like 😃

PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthorPurpleSpring

Have taken it into consideration and has started to use a more respectful tone from the disciples towards the mc, mostly just did not know how to write a disciple... After all first time I'm writing something like it xD Personally also think that there was a need for a bit more respect towards the master (Xuan Hao) and hopefully I will get it right xD

Floating_Clouds:First thank you for taking my view into consideration. I am totally fine with MC character and even I don't want to see another of those arrogant MC but I think a master should get its rightful respect as someone who changed a person's life by that person. But don't give it too much thought as I know how difficult it is to write something just go as you like 😃
XianxiaandPlotonly
XianxiaandPlotonlyLv12XianxiaandPlotonly

GG Author-san

PurpleSpring:Have taken it into consideration and has started to use a more respectful tone from the disciples towards the mc, mostly just did not know how to write a disciple... After all first time I'm writing something like it xD Personally also think that there was a need for a bit more respect towards the master (Xuan Hao) and hopefully I will get it right xD
PurpleSpring
PurpleSpringAuthorPurpleSpring

XianxiaandPlotonly:GG Author-san