Review Detail of AppleyGod in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Writing quality is probably better than 97% of the other stories on this site. Near perfect grammar, and paragraphs that flow well into each other make for a nice, light reading experience. The story has fairly consistent updates. The story progresses slowly, but surely. This story has action, but not much, as it isn't the focal point of the story. The story hasn't strayed from the point of the story, which is "system that's used to cultivate disciples." The best way to write a story like this is to take the main content of the story, and amplify that as much as possible. Is your story about cultivating disciples? focus on the disciples cultivating. (as of chapter 57) The MC uses actual logic, him not being an original inhabitant of the wuxia world he resides in. The MC often questions why people in this world think the way that they do (which seems to be an entertaining way to poke fun at other wuxia stories.) The MC uses his system as intended, but doesn't completely give up on doing his own thing just because he has a system. The characters besides the MC don't have too much depth to them yet, but they have enough individuality to keep you interested. The MC's first disciple (as of chapter 57) is learning and growing as a person and learning not to be overconfident. There isn't too much world background yet (because it's only chapter 57 of a slow-burn story,) but what we have is pretty decent. We're slowly being shown different sects, and getting bits and pieces of things happening around the MC's sect. Overall, it's a nice, slow read that you can read when you're in a bad mood and need to relax, if you're sick of typical, blockheaded wuxia MCs, and if you're getting tired of the average story on this site having borderline unreadable grammar.