Review Detail of Aether_Reed in Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
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It's entertaining enough to keep my attention. That's all the matters to me. I like these types, where the MC has to accept disciples. There isn't enough to really criticize, the grammar and spelling is fine. Maybe someone could argue you should've expanded on when and how the actual MC took over the body of his predecessor? It just jumped straight into the action, but I actually prefer this over some long info dump at the beginning. Anyways, I look forward to the more.
Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough
PurpleSpring
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Aether_Reed:Wow. Fast reply. You're welcome. Is there an update schedule at all?
Aether_Reed:Wow. Fast reply. You're welcome. Is there an update schedule at all?
Think the update schedule will be 7 chapters a week! Maybe a few less or more from time to time, but I want to keep the average around 7 for now!
Aether_Reed:Wow. Fast reply. You're welcome. Is there an update schedule at all?
author i think proper raw cultivation would be great instead of magic and all as cultivation gets more levels and more logical within illogical ,
PurpleSpring:Thanks for the Review! Wondered whether I should do the long introduction and info dump at the start to explain the random fantasy magic stuff that caused him to end up in a cultivation world, but decided to just go with something simple so I could start the story faster :d
Animesh_Tewary:author i think proper raw cultivation would be great instead of magic and all as cultivation gets more levels and more logical within illogical ,
about the exposition/info dump part, it good that you decide not to do so in early on, but hope you don't neglect in world building/exposition there. Here are a video that analyze and show some method to do so better without make it boring for reader: + On Writing: How to deliver exposition PART ONE [ Avatar l Matrix l Game of Thrones l Harry Potter ] Oh and I also recommend you check this channel there since lot of his video help give idea and advice to not fall into the pithole in those topic there, with his short but funny, sarcastic advice of how 'not' to write certain scene, also with animation example of that 'cliche'' so at least you know what to avoid/subvert (after all cliche' isn't good or bad, it just a tool and depend on how author use it), here is one example: + CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT– Terrible Writing Advice
PurpleSpring:no idea regarding that :d
I find that really ridiculous. I prefer novels without romance and often skip books that has it unless its really good to the point that I wouldn't mind having it. It isn't boring at all.
BrabbitX:romance ads flavour. Having no romance is like eating bread without butter. boring.
BrabbitX:romance ads flavour. Having no romance is like eating bread without butter. boring.
Yeah, but thats way too rare, the novel needs to be amazing to not have any romance elements in it. Like the legendary mechanic (thankfully it has some hints of it)
TediousHamster:While that is true some works doesn't have romance in it and still managed to be quite good
Yeah, that's true. Praise the orc is good too for me with no romance and lord of mysteries. They're old works tho but is still a good read
BrabbitX:Yeah, but thats way too rare, the novel needs to be amazing to not have any romance elements in it. Like the legendary mechanic (thankfully it has some hints of it)
