Review Detail of Gryz in The Villainess and I, her Zombie

This will be my attempt at an unbiased review after completing the novel. Updating Stability: 5/5 There's not much to say since it was mostly 2 ch/day. Writing Quality: 4/5 The sentences and grammar are easy to read and understandable, but there are typos here and there. I know I didn't point out all of them because I miss them too! Character Design: 4/5 I honestly loved Zombie and Cranberry's characters. They are very unique and have a special charm to them. Since this was mainly focused on them, it's understandable to not see the other characters. These characters are very life-like IMO but they could have been more fleshed out (except the antagonsit since she is) Story Development: 3/5 If I had to be honest, everything before the second playthrough was amazing. There were some slow parts here and there but overall, the story was well developed and I enjoyed watching Zombie and Cranberry's development. However, after the second playthrough started I felt the story became a little bland and very slow. I unfortunately felt a bit demotivated waiting for the next chapters because I knew how the end would eventually turn out and we were just waiting for the puzzle pieces to go in their place. There were some nice plot twists here and there, but it didn't have the same appeal and charm the first playthrough had. But the first playthrough is a MUST READ. World Background: 3/5 I liked the setting and learning of the different parts of the kingdom. I understand that Fruit Salad kingdom is the main place but I wish we could have learned more about the rest of the world. They seem to have been thrown away and although I enjoyed reading about Fruit Salad kingdom, it would have been nice to read about other places.