Review Detail of Troll_Fox in The Villainess and I, her Zombie

Currently in Chapter 7-8: The story has a lot of potential but is wrote in the way that would make a lot of readers drop it after Chapter 5-7. Let me explain. The current cast of characters till chapter 8 are pretty much Name + Action and nothing else. Even the two main characters we have are the type of characters that doesn’t really have any concrete personalities. we have Zombie, the….well, zombie, who is an isekai protagonist that is claimed by the person who reincarnated him to have all him memories but acts basically like a meek simp to the girl. The most human/expressive i seen this character even act is the one scene where he wanted to tell his family about his death. The girl (can’t remember name) is the character everyone hates in the early chapter. She’s basically abusive, manipulative, uncaring and arrogant. Claiming that the mc is nothing but a dead zombie even though afterward, it’s hinted that she can understand him. She never took any responsibility for her own actions either and rather blaming it on others. Maybe there are reasons hinted at why this is the way it is but as of chapter 8, we only have a single hint why she acts the way she does. Other characters on the other hand, Is basically nonexistent. No one other than the two get any screen time for long and the world is basically the girl’s mother garden and the training room. This might change in the future. Although i have to give praise to the author for being able to create the perfect villain and her loyal henchman in this case, i do frown on how much the girl’s personality changed in just one chapter. All of a sudden, she wasn’t the person that the readers wanted dead or punished anymore, as if someone replaced her with a good twin version. Anyways, i’ll try to write more reviews as i go. Hopefully this turn into a story of my own taste though.