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Unravell
UnravellLv22yrUnravell

I love the concept of this novel but I cant accept the fact that the mc went from being rebellious to being a servant who completely adores his owner. I know that they have been together for a long time but the girl treated the mc like dirt and you expect me to believe the mc has become completely loyal from this.

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The Villainess and I, her Zombie

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Gryz
GryzLv15Gryz

idk where you got rebellious from, but Zombie's race/class is called "Eternal Servant"... the name kind of explains it. Plus, his change to an undead species gave him a skill called rotten brain, which dulls his common sense and decreases his knowledge a bit. He wouldn't be thinking like a normal human would

Unravell
UnravellLv2Unravell

Firstly, rotten brain only helps prevent mental attacks like from the women who tried to make him her slave and secondly, if you compare the mcs behaviour from the start and later on in the novel there is a vast difference in loyalty and even if the mc is stupid no one would become loyal after getting beaten every day. The mcs class being an eternal servant doesn't mean the mc is loyal it just means he is a servant forever.

Gryz:idk where you got rebellious from, but Zombie's race/class is called "Eternal Servant"... the name kind of explains it. Plus, his change to an undead species gave him a skill called rotten brain, which dulls his common sense and decreases his knowledge a bit. He wouldn't be thinking like a normal human would
Gryz
GryzLv15Gryz

Are we reading the same novel? It literally says what I said about Rotten Brain in chapter 64. Also, yeah. No HUMAN would be loyal after being beaten, but Zombie is an undead with a skewed common sense. He sees these "beatings" as training. Plus, he isn't even "beaten" or shown beaten after a volume or two. As for that last part, you should've seen what Zombie said to Cranberry when she was feeling isolated in her household. He still follows her orders in latest chapters and can choose to not follow them, but he puts Cranberry first.

Unravell:Firstly, rotten brain only helps prevent mental attacks like from the women who tried to make him her slave and secondly, if you compare the mcs behaviour from the start and later on in the novel there is a vast difference in loyalty and even if the mc is stupid no one would become loyal after getting beaten every day. The mcs class being an eternal servant doesn't mean the mc is loyal it just means he is a servant forever.
Gryz
GryzLv15Gryz

Sorry if I sounded aggresive, just trying to put some emphasis on some of my points

Unravell:Firstly, rotten brain only helps prevent mental attacks like from the women who tried to make him her slave and secondly, if you compare the mcs behaviour from the start and later on in the novel there is a vast difference in loyalty and even if the mc is stupid no one would become loyal after getting beaten every day. The mcs class being an eternal servant doesn't mean the mc is loyal it just means he is a servant forever.
Unravell
UnravellLv2Unravell

I've only read up to chapter 57 so I didn't know about rotten brains other effect. Tbh I still don't understand the point your trying to make as sure all the stuff in your first paragraph may be true but just because the zombies mind is messed up a bit doesn't mean he will gain loyalty through the way she treats him. The other paragraph you talk about actually proves my point as it shows zombie has free will so none of the points you tell to me where he got his undying loyalty from.(pun intended)

Gryz:Are we reading the same novel? It literally says what I said about Rotten Brain in chapter 64. Also, yeah. No HUMAN would be loyal after being beaten, but Zombie is an undead with a skewed common sense. He sees these "beatings" as training. Plus, he isn't even "beaten" or shown beaten after a volume or two. As for that last part, you should've seen what Zombie said to Cranberry when she was feeling isolated in her household. He still follows her orders in latest chapters and can choose to not follow them, but he puts Cranberry first.
Unravell
UnravellLv2Unravell

I'm also sorry if I come off aggressive as my comment was not intended to be hate for the author but feedback so they can maybe improve their next novel.

Gryz:Sorry if I sounded aggresive, just trying to put some emphasis on some of my points
Gryz
GryzLv15Gryz

Ah I see, my bad I assumed you read up to the latest chapter. I was trying to explain if you misread cause you seemed much more reasonable to talk to than the other reviewers who go like "simp" and drop without waiting for development. You'll see as you read what I'm trying to get at, sorry if I spoiled. Also no worries, kind of hard to convey the tone of the message over text.

Unravell:I'm also sorry if I come off aggressive as my comment was not intended to be hate for the author but feedback so they can maybe improve their next novel.