Review Detail of Sound_Hammer in The Villainess and I, her Zombie
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This is not a heroic story about a no-name guy getting reincarnated into another world, becoming overpowerd, and getting all the ladies. Sorry. The villainess in the title, isn't some misunderstood kindhearted girl either. This story follows two flawed, evil characters. Their characters and relationship develops overtime, even showing the glimps of goodness in them, but at the end of the day there is felling they both share. And that is love! ...for violence, that is. ;)
The Villainess and I, her Zombie
Sound_Hammer
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It would be more enjoyable if he was a no-name guy who was overpowered and got all the ladies, lol. Then at least he wouldn’t have been forced to become a bootlicking simp of a punching bag for the person who murdered him, enslaved him, and proceeded to beat him regularly while he sat there like a little puppy wagging his tail with a smile on his face. It just makes it very difficult, if not impossible, to enjoy reading about an MC who has no problems being treated like that, and even after she starts treating him a little better the MC is still no different than a pet or slave which he is again fine with due to *reasons*. It would’ve been more interesting to see him plot and obtain revenge, but nah, that would take away time from his simping and bootlicking, lol. I know it’s your novel and you can write it however you want but man I just don’t get how such a massochistic, weak, and passive MC is supposed to carry a story that’s more than 20 chapters long, lol.
You mention reasons, so you probably read the auxilary chapter from volume 0 that clears some things up, if with that you still couln't find anything for you in this story - well I'm a bit sad - but don't worry, webnovel has plenty of other authors and multitude of different stories that will surely appeal to you! :) As for your advice about how the MC should be - I myself really enjoy a properly written mc who's overpowered from the start, but unfortunately find myself unable to construct an interesting story with such setting - at least one that would be at least 20 chapters. And that's on me :( That's why I try to start off with a flawed weak character and build them up from a literal trash to a a havoc-wrecking overpowered monstrosity that still has some flaws not to make things boring (once again, I am unable to make things interesting if the MC is perfect and overpowered from the start). I mean, this story starts with a dude who got 67% of his free will taken away by the system, but he gradually gets it back and (a little spoiler!) by the end of the volume 4 (which I am currently working on as I'm writing this long comment, lol) the dynamic of the master - servant relationship changes quite a bit too! Anyway, have a nice day! ;)
J_S_2998:It would be more enjoyable if he was a no-name guy who was overpowered and got all the ladies, lol. Then at least he wouldn’t have been forced to become a bootlicking simp of a punching bag for the person who murdered him, enslaved him, and proceeded to beat him regularly while he sat there like a little puppy wagging his tail with a smile on his face. It just makes it very difficult, if not impossible, to enjoy reading about an MC who has no problems being treated like that, and even after she starts treating him a little better the MC is still no different than a pet or slave which he is again fine with due to *reasons*. It would’ve been more interesting to see him plot and obtain revenge, but nah, that would take away time from his simping and bootlicking, lol. I know it’s your novel and you can write it however you want but man I just don’t get how such a massochistic, weak, and passive MC is supposed to carry a story that’s more than 20 chapters long, lol.
Sound_Hammer:You mention reasons, so you probably read the auxilary chapter from volume 0 that clears some things up, if with that you still couln't find anything for you in this story - well I'm a bit sad - but don't worry, webnovel has plenty of other authors and multitude of different stories that will surely appeal to you! :) As for your advice about how the MC should be - I myself really enjoy a properly written mc who's overpowered from the start, but unfortunately find myself unable to construct an interesting story with such setting - at least one that would be at least 20 chapters. And that's on me :( That's why I try to start off with a flawed weak character and build them up from a literal trash to a a havoc-wrecking overpowered monstrosity that still has some flaws not to make things boring (once again, I am unable to make things interesting if the MC is perfect and overpowered from the start). I mean, this story starts with a dude who got 67% of his free will taken away by the system, but he gradually gets it back and (a little spoiler!) by the end of the volume 4 (which I am currently working on as I'm writing this long comment, lol) the dynamic of the master - servant relationship changes quite a bit too! Anyway, have a nice day! ;)
Sound_Hammer:They will be back from chapter 230 - if I'm counting it correctly at least. :)
I have respect to you as an author and good story writer but this is not my cup of tea .the story is good .but characters are not written we'll and relatable
Sound_Hammer:You mention reasons, so you probably read the auxilary chapter from volume 0 that clears some things up, if with that you still couln't find anything for you in this story - well I'm a bit sad - but don't worry, webnovel has plenty of other authors and multitude of different stories that will surely appeal to you! :) As for your advice about how the MC should be - I myself really enjoy a properly written mc who's overpowered from the start, but unfortunately find myself unable to construct an interesting story with such setting - at least one that would be at least 20 chapters. And that's on me :( That's why I try to start off with a flawed weak character and build them up from a literal trash to a a havoc-wrecking overpowered monstrosity that still has some flaws not to make things boring (once again, I am unable to make things interesting if the MC is perfect and overpowered from the start). I mean, this story starts with a dude who got 67% of his free will taken away by the system, but he gradually gets it back and (a little spoiler!) by the end of the volume 4 (which I am currently working on as I'm writing this long comment, lol) the dynamic of the master - servant relationship changes quite a bit too! Anyway, have a nice day! ;)