Review Detail of kickyx in The Villainess and I, her Zombie

Honestly this wouldve been a good story if the MC wasnt a idiot. Like my guy got enslaved and abused and he just accepts it like its normal.. If it were me I would try to escape because from what I can see all her class did was bring him back to life and connect their mana, her orders can still be ignored as we have seen already, he can literally just escape and she cant do anything. The romance is honestly forced because of the above reason man, if you were going to have him be a zombie to her then at least make it so that she is originally his friend that way he wouldnt have a problem protecting her when he got revived :/ Writing Quality - 4 Stability - 3 Story Dev - 2 Character design - 2 World Background - 2