Review Detail of Cloudsheep in The Villainess and I, her Zombie

Alright so this is my first time writing a review so bear with me ok so i will explain what i like, what i dont like and why >first of writing quality: the writing quality is good, i did not give it a five star since its not on the level of Shakespearean literature but its good so yeah >next one is story development: so must i say that the story's pacing and development is very well done. it never gets boring and will always keep you wanting to read more and know whats next [although i hated how spoiled cranberry acts its very reasonable and is actually vital to her character (just my opinion not a fact) i still hate her a bit though cause she still acts like a B] >ok third ah yes character design: ok so here it is i rated this with a crunchy 3 stars why? cause the author doesnt really care about side characters and when it comes to character description he does it very vaguely which in my opinion kinda makes it bad since you will subconsciously try and create a mental image which will not be good when this thing finally gets a manga >Fourth updating stability so this is the part where i am very understanding and thus i gave it a fat 4 cause i know how busy one can be and how hard it is to manage time >anddd finally world background: so if only there was something like a 4.5 star id rate it since its quite original... ok well except for the system but even that is different since everyone has it and the way it is used is very original or atlest ive never heard it before overall i came for the cliche otome trope but was pleasantly surprised to find something pretty good so yeah pretty much tthats all i can think about to say solid 4.2