Review Detail of Noximillien in SCP - POV: The Chosen One

I Think This Story Is Trash. But Like I Said, I Am Very Excited About This Idea So I'll Continue. Overall I Think My Writing Quality Is Dumb, Every Time I Read It, It Sounds Weird Because The Responses For Each Character Are So Quick And Each Action Goes By So Quick Like I'm Rushing, And I Keep On Pushing My Story To It's Limits So I'll Stop That. But Still I Think My Stability Of Updates Are Fine, Since I Posted 5 Chapters Yesterday. My Character Design Needs Some Work, and I'll Soon Introduce 3 New Characters Named Daniel, James, And [REDACTED]. The Story Development Is Fine, I guess. Like I Said, Each Action Seems To Go By Too Quickly. The World Background Is Also Fine, But I Wouldn't Rate It Perfect. Overall I Think This Story Deserves a 3.4. Story Isn't Doing Too Great Like I Expected, But I Am Extremely Happy Because I Already Have 515 Views Over The Past 10 Hours Thank You So So Much! <3 - Emotional Nonsense