In the story, whoever translated it or writes it has very bad grammar and makes the story hard to follow. The System, which I assume to be a very important aspect of the novel, was bellantly introduced without giving much notice. While I haven’t read past chap. 3, I find it confusing how Vincent just suddenly knows all about how the System works. While I can’t speak for the plot later in the novel, I can tell that a 12 year old can most likely make a more sensible world.
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