Review Detail of Bruno_raul_ in My Checkpoint System Turned Me Into The Godfather of Humanity

Great story and everything, But It just really annoys me how It's not even thaaaat good and It starts being paid at chapter 19, Like what? Even my favorite novels start at 30 chapters at least, I didn't even get to know anything about the novel before It started being paid. If it wasn't for that, It may be one of the best, Well Idk It started being paid so soon that I can't know.