Review Detail of Suenda in I Have the Alchemy Emperor in My Head

Its a great original story that is set in a western fantasy, the only one flaw that has been nagging me about it that has led me to write this review is; Author please use different phrasing rather then although this may have taken a long time to explain, it only happened in an instant. I understand its to meet the word count or something but as someone that is listening to the audio, hearing that after a lengthy fight explanation just triggers something that most people would of just read over to the next part. That's the only flaw about the story that has triggered me after all its used a bit too many times; but love the content and will continue to see how this will all progress in the future =)