The story is quite interesting, and i was quite amazed how long every chapter was. But upon continuous reading, the explanation just goes on and on, it's like 40% main story and 60% explanation on how things work, what that thing is, etc. This made me skip a couple of paragraphs, but still get the gist of the story. So author-nim, please omit the long-winded explanation, and unnecessary inclusions.
Fu Xiaochen
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