It was an excellent Fan-Fic up until chapter 8, but the quality dropped off a fucking cliff afterwards. I’d suggest getting a beta, but I don’t even think that’ll fix that shit.
SomeGuyOnDarkArmor
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I agree. I don’t understand the point of transmigration in the story. It was basically useless. Good review.
you should read again because the mcs to find remembered and explained to himself why he lost them.