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great novel just that the sentences and paragraphs are a lil choppy bro, if this is your second language I understand and all but I would recommend asking someone to proofread and edit for you. I can help if you want tho I like this book it has a great idea and its different props to you.👏👏
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thank you for your review😇 , and about grammer you guessed it right English is not my first language and I really don't know how to get another person help me in webnovel app and it's not an easy job at all , it takes a lot of time and I don't want to make another person busy ,thank you for your offer😇