Review Detail of Yeet_Feet_8961 in Reborn as a Dog

I mean first of all the character development is quite non existent as he lets his sister walk all over him even when he clearly doesnt like it. Second of all im not sure if this is on purpose but the author doesnt know what spasming is they replace twitiching for it and it gets really repetitive All in all until things get better this fic isnt too high in my books