Review Detail of DragonSlayer_706 in Fate/Persona

Item: Fate/Persona
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

DragonSlayer_706Lv43yrDragonSlayer_706

This is a great fanfic imo and I hope anyone reading this tries it out(and that it wont be dropped). My only critic for this fanfic is that its kinda confusing to tell whos talking but, it could just be me.

Fate/Persona

Dawei

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DaweiAuthorDawei

Thanks I might start placing the names of whos talking before the dialogue with speech marks.

3yr

DragonSlayer_706Lv4DragonSlayer_706

Your welcome, I noticed you did that a bit in the latest chapter and it looked good to me

Dawei:Thanks I might start placing the names of whos talking before the dialogue with speech marks.

3yr

Nepsoul_DeadlyLv1Nepsoul_Deadly

More like a broken record that keeps repeating itself.

2yr