This is super cute. The drawback is that you see quickly that its a heartbreaker. Infidelity is smelled from chapter 2. You see kissing on the couch and a beautiful woman admiring her brother's friend when you already know she has a crush on somebody else. But kudos to the author for making it feel bad before anything is a thing.
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