Review Detail of Tarou in The Hidden Village: Naruto Fanfic(Finished)
Review detail
By no means am I hating on this fanfic. I liked the direction you were going with a new hidden village. But to me it seems that you’re obsessed with dragons. I wouldn’t mind the constant mentioning of dragons, if your mc had any other substance or personality other than ‘dragon village this, I’m the dragon king that’. The personalities seemed rushed and the pacing is way too fast for a fanfic of Naruto. We’re just suddenly thrown in Tanaka’s life without an explanation of any of his Powers/arsenal.
The Hidden Village: Naruto Fanfic(Finished)
LazyTanaka
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Well, let me clear something you didn't understand or didn't know, first of all, he is not obsessed with dragons but it signifies him, if you know a little bit of Japanese, his last name Ryuuji means dragon, as for the fast pace, if you have read the synopsis, it was literally written there, that the story is fast pac, well, that's it.
LazyTanaka:Well, let me clear something you didn't understand or didn't know, first of all, he is not obsessed with dragons but it signifies him, if you know a little bit of Japanese, his last name Ryuuji means dragon, as for the fast pace, if you have read the synopsis, it was literally written there, that the story is fast pac, well, that's it.
