Review Detail of Zhanye in A self insert as a Lannister
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As a "Top 30 Originals Author" maybe I have some property to say a couple words about this book. The story have a couple problems, if I was writing it I won't will rush it that way, probably will make it more slowly for the reader got some empathy by the characters, probably add more important "NPC" lines, maybe a few friends? Btw, that's the only thing that I should change about it, the story is good, I like the Mc, I like his skills, I like the story development, even heaving a couple problems it still deserve a 5 stars review, keep updating it author, maybe make a patreon to earn some money from the story too, you deserve it buddy đ
A self insert as a Lannister
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