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I'll be totally honest, first disclosure I actually read this on a different site, i hadnt realized this was on Webnovel and i lowkey glad I didnt pay for it. I found the completed novel and finished what has been done for all 3 volumes. the novel starting off was perfect, I was skeptical of Charlton and didn't like him much at first. But the author moved the story perfectly, the reader falls in love with the Serena and Charlton and gets wrapped up in their romance and has set up the whole story of how they will disband her current engagement and overcome it all. I was absolutely sick to my stomach at the turn this story took, having her drugged and raped for a week because of the obsessive and manic crown prince was horrible to read and then to have to see her fall in love with him made me disgusted. I literally had to skim the last few chapters of volume 3 because of what was happening, no matter how awful the Crown prince was treated growing up I will never sympathize with him as a character. He groomed her body for a week to react to his, drugged her for hours on end, and got her pregnant while she was drugged/raped. There is nothing that I can read that will make that okay. sorry author I know its your novel and maybe all of your novels have such a gut wrenching twist to it like this but I've never had a story actually make my stomach turn. Usually I wait it out and read the full novel giving it a chance but this is my limit.

Making the second male lead fall in love with me, the villainess

champilyn

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champilyn
champilynAuthorchampilyn

Thanks for reading and for the review. 😄 i do enjoy the twist i have written but i understand many dont. 😅 the reason serena fell in love with geoffrey at that time was because he came at her lowest point. When she felt abandoned he was there and has always been there. I think it’s the hero worship that roped her in. Plus she Knew what she did and there he was still. Of course she didnt know the truth though. the spoilers part well, if i continue writing this one day, it might not necessarily go that way, idk. I have been discouraged bec of all the bashing 😅😅😅 but i will continue this novel one day someday. Dont know if people will read though. 🥲

champilyn
champilynAuthorchampilyn

Hello! Just want to say that the sequel for this novel is now serializing. If interested, the title is ‘treacherous hearts: return of the second male lead’ you may add it to your lib! Thanks!!!!