Review Detail of Ash_Phoenix in Making the second male lead fall in love with me, the villainess

Thank you so much for believIng hEhehe i wont disappoint. i know how good it is once you reach the part where i’m at now the plot is very good. well since i wrote it, i am completely bias. but i dont onow how many dropped i just hope to write more to the end. truth Was that i want to give up this novel if you notice i made other novels, but Now im back to loving this novel so much and i cant sleep wanting to write the next chapter but so many things in the way like life. lol!!! My other novels ugh i aropped updatIng again to Focus on this one. trust me, it will be good. 😅 thank you for giving this Novel another tRy! 🥰

another question how many chapters are left ? And volume

Chapters i cant say maybe 150? Volume will be till volume 5. volume 4 will explore geoffrey and serenA married life and serena as cRown princess and future queen you know what she will do or might depends. if people still read this novel might work that out if not, well just Gonna jump to volume 5 and end this thing 😅

don't do this but I know volume 4 will be hard for you but I think you have plan ,many things has to be answered and people will read it after v5 ,actually I want see how strong serena's love for charlton ,i think v4 will give me the ans ,so I will continue it

Well honestly, once You get tO chapter 348, u will see why i think it would be easy for Me to write serena geoffrey 😅 haha careful not to like geoffrey bec i just love his coMplex Character in all thEse. 🥲 tbh right now he’s my favorite character BUT of course anyone other than me might say otherwise 🤣

well I just need a ending where everyone will be happy. And I know You like Geoffrey but suddenly all that charlton did is just joking then it will be awkward . If serena end up with geoffrey ,I am okay now .for charlton it will be sad but that doesn't mean he will lose coz he will find a person better then her .There are lots of women who need him or will reciprocate his feeling or perhaps A SFML

Sorry for putting my nose in you comment, I totally respect but: Can we really call Geoffrey a monster for one only mistake ? I would say no He has always treated her with respect and giving her the space she wanted and needed, as far as we know apart from what he did to Serena he has no other faults. You said it isn’t justified, I would say it is, why because once he knew his cousin and Serena had cheated in his back for 3 years, he lost his mind there so what would be his reaction: * kill her ❌ * Kill him ❌ * Kill himself ❌ *Kill everyone / becoming a tyrant ❌ * Cry and walk way ❌ * He raped her.✅ * Why because he got blind with the pain, while he was giving her space telling her how much he loved her, sending her flowers and etc … well she was making love with Charlton his cousin and all this was killing him inside, let’s not forget that this a story based on Victorian Era not the modern days. Quick example: real story Once I saw in the news a women who found out her daughter was raped by her own brother, what she did ? She killed him by stabbing him to his death, in her mind she did a favour to the world by killing a sick monster. Some will understand her some will blame. I would say her action was justified. If he comes to regret his actions, he is worth it, if he doesn’t then he isn’t, he need to understand what he did is wrOng in many ways. See what will happen from now on

And serena is acting like a teenager when her soul is 70+,she herself know that what she did is wrong so,its all started with her,if she talk G from the start and ask to be civil and break off the engagement,the incident wont happen.all pur actions have consequences,serena should know that very well.

Hello! Just want to say that the sequel for this novel is now serializing. If interested, the title is ‘treacherous hearts: return of the second male lead’ you may add it to your lib! Thanks!!!!