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TheSmileyHuman
TheSmileyHumanLv23yrTheSmileyHuman

I really love this story especially the relationship between Serena and Charlton and the part where they held hands while singing 'I can't help falling in love with you' That made my heart flutter and if I may add my heart rarely if ever flutters especially when it comes to adults. I am very picky when it comes to novels and manga so if I like it that usually means it's really good. Thank you Author-Chan for writing such a spectacular story.

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Making the second male lead fall in love with me, the villainess

champilyn

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champilyn
champilynAuthorchampilyn

Thank you for this wonderful review. i hope that you will continue reading this story to the end. I wiLl do my best not to disappoint in the coming chapters. đŸ„°đŸ„°đŸ„°â€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïž

TheSmileyHuman
TheSmileyHumanLv2TheSmileyHuman

I just squealed like a like a little girl when I saw that you replied. I'm fangirling so hard right now. I just want to let you know that I think your writing is absolutely wonderful and that you make my day so much brighter with your story and I love how you always reply back to comments. I will absolutely continue reading this story till the end.

champilyn:Thank you for this wonderful review. i hope that you will continue reading this story to the end. I wiLl do my best not to disappoint in the coming chapters. đŸ„°đŸ„°đŸ„°â€ïžâ€ïžâ€ïž
champilyn
champilynAuthorchampilyn

Thank you again. you Have no idea how I loOk forward to comments and reviews. It truly makes me happy as a writer to know that people are actually reading my worK. it gives me inspiration to continue Writing. I relly hope that the coming chapters will continue to make you happy becaUse there will be some drama later on. đŸ„Č but let us enjoy their lovely moments first. 😅

TheSmileyHuman:I just squealed like a like a little girl when I saw that you replied. I'm fangirling so hard right now. I just want to let you know that I think your writing is absolutely wonderful and that you make my day so much brighter with your story and I love how you always reply back to comments. I will absolutely continue reading this story till the end.
TheSmileyHuman
TheSmileyHumanLv2TheSmileyHuman

It makes me sad when people get upset that there are misunderstandings and drama in the stories but that's only because they seem to not know that for a story to continue there has to be at least some drama if there isn't then the story ends too quickly and the ending doesn't seem satisfactory cause there was no hardships but sometimes there is too much drama and the story just seems to dragged on for far too long. Of course I'm not saying your story seems like it's doing that I'm just babbling at this point lol.

champilyn:Thank you again. you Have no idea how I loOk forward to comments and reviews. It truly makes me happy as a writer to know that people are actually reading my worK. it gives me inspiration to continue Writing. I relly hope that the coming chapters will continue to make you happy becaUse there will be some drama later on. đŸ„Č but let us enjoy their lovely moments first. 😅
champilyn
champilynAuthorchampilyn

Yup. even in real life, drAma is needed to forge a relationship stronger. i also dont want to drag the story in the Future, but i also dont want It to be unsatisfactory. like how did that happen? How did the story move that way suddenly. haha! i do get your point though. i have neveR attempted to read a novel with 1K plus chapters. when I started this novel I thought 100 -120 chapters are enough. After a while, i though 200 chapters. however the way things are goIng now, i estimate 300 chapters at least. 😅 you’ll see later why.

TheSmileyHuman:It makes me sad when people get upset that there are misunderstandings and drama in the stories but that's only because they seem to not know that for a story to continue there has to be at least some drama if there isn't then the story ends too quickly and the ending doesn't seem satisfactory cause there was no hardships but sometimes there is too much drama and the story just seems to dragged on for far too long. Of course I'm not saying your story seems like it's doing that I'm just babbling at this point lol.
TheSmileyHuman
TheSmileyHumanLv2TheSmileyHuman

Also if I may add I like how you made the prince have an ego not be all super kind and humble because well he is a prince so of course he's going to have a ego.

champilyn:Yup. even in real life, drAma is needed to forge a relationship stronger. i also dont want to drag the story in the Future, but i also dont want It to be unsatisfactory. like how did that happen? How did the story move that way suddenly. haha! i do get your point though. i have neveR attempted to read a novel with 1K plus chapters. when I started this novel I thought 100 -120 chapters are enough. After a while, i though 200 chapters. however the way things are goIng now, i estimate 300 chapters at least. 😅 you’ll see later why.
champilyn
champilynAuthorchampilyn

YEs, i’m trying to make the characters relatable and a little realistic though this is fiction. 😂 SometimeS they can be A little immature, or twisted, but considering that they are supposed to be teenagers, then I think they’re just acting their age.

TheSmileyHuman:Also if I may add I like how you made the prince have an ego not be all super kind and humble because well he is a prince so of course he's going to have a ego.
TheSmileyHuman
TheSmileyHumanLv2TheSmileyHuman

I think that is awesome I love it when the characters are relatable and realistic and makes the story so much more interesting and makes you want to read more.

champilyn:YEs, i’m trying to make the characters relatable and a little realistic though this is fiction. 😂 SometimeS they can be A little immature, or twisted, but considering that they are supposed to be teenagers, then I think they’re just acting their age.