Review Detail of LaurentCross in My life in twilight AU

Alice is amazing but it isn’t enough to keep me interested . 1. plot is underdeveloped and rushed 2.mc is bland also very poorly written 3. very little world building and background 4.very unoriginal plot feels like every other twilight fic mashed together. 5.mc’s family is better written and more interesting than your main character 6.grammar needs work it’s not terrible but it needs to be fixed . positives below ⬇️ 1.Stable updates 2.Alice is the love interest 3.Grammar isn’t terrible