Review Detail of LordSputnik in The Serious Series Spacenovel
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Serious review for a not-so-serious novel. The Good: I do love science-fiction! I also really enjoy it when a novel doesn't take itself seriously. We also have a wide array of characters to pick from that makes it rather fun! The Bad: Grammar is horrendous at times, but it does start to improve in the later chapters. I feel like this is a collection of short stories without any story. I'm a little confused by the chapters all using the same names over and over, but I think the author is trying to indicate which 'story' we're in. The Neutral: What is going on? Where is this story going? Will these unique stories tie together somehow later? I feel like a lot is going on, but I can't grasp any of it...
The Serious Series Spacenovel
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hey man, thanks i guess, keep on reading! Ill eventually get around to edit some of the earlier chapters. until then my various excuses for horrendous grammar are as follows; time, writing on the phone, blunt stupidity and far too much dope. story wise, be prepared. I have now set the stage and it ll soon start blowing up!
Sorry if my review sounds harsh, by no means do I want you to feel discouraged. I try to be as critical as possible since almost every single review I see on WebNovel is "It's GR8 PLZ RD LOLZ!" followed by 5 stars. I gave my own novel a 3.4 even so I try to give an unbiased honest review.
etnrednal:hey man, thanks i guess, keep on reading! Ill eventually get around to edit some of the earlier chapters. until then my various excuses for horrendous grammar are as follows; time, writing on the phone, blunt stupidity and far too much dope. story wise, be prepared. I have now set the stage and it ll soon start blowing up!