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Just_A_Simp
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Why the **** would people criticise this? I mean, seriously, the concept is nice, and THERE AREHARDLY SPELLING MISTAKES. They even took the time to write such long episodes, and so many, this is amazing and deserves better than 4.2 stars

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Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi

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Solo_hunter
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MC : despite having the knowledge of future events and the characters, still, at times, acts like he doesn't know anything. He freaking thinks that Danzo won't kill a leaf shinobi!! He trusts 3rd a bit too much. And is shown surprised/wondering about a lot of things that are very clear in manga/anime. So it's very inconsistent to see MC using his knowledge in one scene, and act like he doesn't know anything in other. Also for some reason, he decided to write down all his memories from his past life in a freaking book! Pure stupidity (I guess in future someone will steal it to make the enemies stronger). 3rd Hokage : He is shown to be even lamer than in canon. Danzo sent root to assassinate him? Okay, no need to do anything or even mention it to Danzo. Danzo is still maintaining root? Alright, no worries. Danzo tried to kill Kakashi? That's okay, I won't ever bring it up or take any action. Also orochimaru stole that book

Aceron
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"HARDLY SPELLING MISTAKES" are you serious? I thought I was having a stroke trying to read it. I am still trying but come on, it like he directly used MTL and didn't even edit afterwards. unless you are a professional some grammatical error are expected but this reads like someone using google translate copy/paste and not invest any effort to make it readable