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LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv53yrLordInsanity

Nice novel. If only the MC wouldn't go to such unreasonable and dumb lengths to satisfy his own goals(?) this novel would be great. Now you might be thinking from my first statement, that the MC is a person who would kill a person to achieve his goal. That's not what I meant. He would do something stupid or annoying to satisfy himself. Case 1 is presented in Ollivanders, he came back there after getting his wand to see his mother. Which in turn alerted Malfoy Senior of his existence. For some reason it seemed like love at first sight to him after being pushed out of her womb and being immediately disowned by his father, and his mother who was confunded? into accepting it. You think his father would just sit around and watch his spawn toddle around without bothering him? Just reading that chapter was annoying on a whole new level. You'd think a mature and rational person was reincarnated, but nope! Just a typical savant. Case 2: He joins Hogwarts, and there's no mention of the Room of Requirement (RoR). He makes a point that there's no place where he can escape Dumble's sights, but why would the headmaster even bother with him when Potter and Weasley are around? Author doesn't address it. RoR = Possible mental defenses, wealth, and more. Case 3: His philosophical debates on morals/ethics/world views with an 11 year old girl, and later another senior student. Blah Blah Blah Muggleborn students aren't treated right, the world is violent, magic. Ok, you didn't need to start a lecture to an 11 year old, no matter how smart she is. It was a senseless waste of time, instead of a lecture, just let her know in terms an 11 year old would understand. Case 4: From what I am getting here, a reincarnated grown man becomes a Malfoy, is disowned because he's thought to be a squib, and now he is seemingly hype focused on his birth mother, even implying to the readers that she is closer to him than the adoptive parents that have raised him for years? Where's the logic in this? Case 5: Should have put this earlier, but he confides hermione into his "little secret" of being a pureblood but classified as a muggleborn. He's really smart, like he was never an 11 year old in his past life or ever met another 11 year old who can keep a secret? Author has a thing for Hermione. Case 6: What was the point putting him in Ghouse? Why not Ravenclaw, since he likes to study? Overall your MC acts like a smartass with dumb reasons. I know he has some knowledge on the canon, since he mentions things that he shouldn't know several times? I am and C23 and am already frustrated.

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Harry Potter: New World

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AdamNics
AdamNicsLv5AdamNics

I agree with all of this more or less. Not sure if he cares more about Narcissus than his adoptive parents but the Author writes so little of his interactions with them that he might as well not care.

unknown_daoist
unknown_daoistLv14unknown_daoist

Yep, thought so too.....the story isnt boring, but i also think there are several cases, where its just not logical pr even paradox to past actions....... But what bugs me the most is the fact you mentioned with the RoR etc. --> he has future knowledge, want to quickly improve himself BUT doesnt use these godly possibilities....i dont understand it..... So i wont drop it, bc its a chilly read, but its far from some other HPfanfics in terms of deeper magic-society thinking and logical approach of the MC with future knowledge etc.

Rieshit_Ganguli
Rieshit_GanguliLv3Rieshit_Ganguli

can u recommend me some?

unknown_daoist:Yep, thought so too.....the story isnt boring, but i also think there are several cases, where its just not logical pr even paradox to past actions....... But what bugs me the most is the fact you mentioned with the RoR etc. --> he has future knowledge, want to quickly improve himself BUT doesnt use these godly possibilities....i dont understand it..... So i wont drop it, bc its a chilly read, but its far from some other HPfanfics in terms of deeper magic-society thinking and logical approach of the MC with future knowledge etc.
N0_Hope
N0_HopeLv2N0_Hope

Thank you very much for giving such a detailed resume on a bad experience . I really though of giving a chance to this ff but if what you say is correct then I would have gave up on the same chapter as you . Thanks for all the effort in making such a long and precise resume :D

Boroxx
BoroxxLv11Boroxx

Thanks for the review and the detailed examples, seeing the number of chapters in this story i was about to give it a try but from the examples you gave i wouldnt be able to read this without pulling my hairs out and screaming

striker45
striker45Lv13striker45

thanks for review in detail

Jackson_Slade
Jackson_SladeLv1Jackson_Slade

Thanks for letting me know.

Yum_q327
Yum_q327Lv1Yum_q327

The only thing that annoys here is the abstruse Hermione and ms who worsens this topic. The rest of the story is pretty good.