Review Detail of ILovemyself_84 in MULTIVERSE SYSTEM:-MY SIXTH POWER IS ABLE USE DEATH POWER

Item: MULTIVERSE SYSTEM:-MY SIXTH POWER IS ABLE USE DEATH POWER
Rating: 5

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ILovemyself_84Lv42yrILovemyself_84

I really like this book I see a lot of potential in it but the only problem I have is the grammar if the author can work on that and improve it this book would be even better also a bit of Advice make sure the MC has’s some challenges in his travels so it makes the book bit more Interesting.

MULTIVERSE SYSTEM:-MY SIXTH POWER IS ABLE USE DEATH POWER

FYDemonVenerable

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FYDemonVenerableAuthorFYDemonVenerable

thank you.i really appreciate in future i will try improve quality also english English is not my first ur even second language so i will try to improve overall quality.

2yr

ILovemyself_84Lv4ILovemyself_84

Its good even though English is not you first Language you are still doing better than most 👍

FYDemonVenerable:thank you.i really appreciate in future i will try improve quality also english English is not my first ur even second language so i will try to improve overall quality.

2yr

FYDemonVenerableAuthorFYDemonVenerable

well really thanxs man from bottom of my heart 🥺☺️☺️☺️🤗

ILovemyself_84:Its good even though English is not you first Language you are still doing better than most 👍

2yr