Review Detail of aurora_moon90 in Morphing Iniquity

Hello. Truth to be told, I was quite confused by the first chapter. As I progressed, I could understood and fathoms all the descriptions and details in the novel. It does describe very well how depressed people thought. We, everyone of us have some imaginations, how to make the world a much better place to live and etc, and in other time, we sometimes preferred silence more than bustling people around our proximity. It's that complicated. You did a very good job with your story. But it will be much better if you could develop it in a proper plot line.