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I am using Google Translate: The novel is VERY GENERIC. It shows that the author is a novice or so I want to believe, because the MC commits a lot of stupid things. Revealing his heritage to the butler in chapter 3 or 4, without getting to know him better, sucks. The MC gives away Silver Grade techniques like they're worthless, and it can cause suspicion when someone goes to investigate Dry City. The tournament thing IS TOTALLY FORCED AND WITHOUT ANY SENSE, if you want to go unnoticed then don't go to a tournament where a whole country is going to see you. And that bullshit excuse from the author that there are no cameras, nor can they record it is nonsense. The news will travel one way or another and take a picture of him, discover his talent and kill him for an idiot. The novel is full of nonsense. I'm stuck at chapter 37 and I don't need to read any more. Everything was very predictable and there is nothing substantial or interesting in all that journey. I imagine that the only ones who could like so much cliché is first-time readers. I hope the author improves in his future projects because this is a very clichéd and repetitive novel.

The Rise of the Black Plain

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