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An interesting novel. Nothing new but interesting. But in chapter 550 (or so), there was a planet-sized plot hole. 3 people came to the city of MS but began to run away after learning about the danger in different directions, they were pursued 2 were caught and 3 caught up only when he had time to transmit information. How he ran away is just horror, the avatar himself wrote that from the City of the MC to the village where he was able to run for 2-3 days. Let's say even if he somehow managed to do it in 1 day, how did he get there? Does he have infinite energy? First, 10-15 people were chasing him and interfering with him. Secondly, why didn't someone chase him anymore? where is Minos or others? They didn't know where to run? but in this place there is not even grass and there were traces of the chase. Thirdly, even if by some miracle he ran to this village, how did he send the raven? why does the crow know where to fly to deliver the letter to his family? Does the author know that crows fly only to the place where they are taught, and not to the address? how did he break away from the chase to have time to write so many words? It's just awful. There was a good novel, but now the desire to read is gone. Google translator
The Rise of the Black Plain
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You don't seem to have paid attention to what you read since, in the chapter where this happens, it is said that the person made the crow recognize where it should go before. And no matter if the real crows function differently, do you think the ones in the novel are the same? Why? By any chance, are the real crows capable of cultivation? Then they are different. As for what you said about it being able to run for days, that's not impossible. After all, as much as he would get tired, so would his pursuers. Don't forget that they were weaker than he was. As for why other stronger people didn't chase him, well, it wouldn't help. The man had already gained a significant advantage over the people in the dry city, and even if there were a beast at the same level as him, it would be impossible to catch up with him after a while. See the chapter where the mc learns his movement technique to know how far the opponent would be after more than an hour of running.
Thanks for the answer. But to me it still looks strange. Wouldn't it have been easier to just have their own crow with them? It's just weird that the investigating group doesn't have a means of communication with them. And so I have already read to the last chapter and am waiting for the continuation. Still an interesting novel.
RVN_1998:You don't seem to have paid attention to what you read since, in the chapter where this happens, it is said that the person made the crow recognize where it should go before. And no matter if the real crows function differently, do you think the ones in the novel are the same? Why? By any chance, are the real crows capable of cultivation? Then they are different. As for what you said about it being able to run for days, that's not impossible. After all, as much as he would get tired, so would his pursuers. Don't forget that they were weaker than he was. As for why other stronger people didn't chase him, well, it wouldn't help. The man had already gained a significant advantage over the people in the dry city, and even if there were a beast at the same level as him, it would be impossible to catch up with him after a while. See the chapter where the mc learns his movement technique to know how far the opponent would be after more than an hour of running.