Review Detail of Yarakiri in The Rise of the Black Plain

Novel difficult to write down. I got to chapter 300, and the novel has very good and very bad sides to it. Let's start with the good, the evolution of the Black Plain is very interesting to follow, with a lot of nice little characters to follow. The army and the city is well managed. Really anything on the plain black side is really good. Now let's move on to what's outside the Black Plain. As soon as the mc goes on an "excursion" outside, nothing goes, impossible coincidences which come true and everything is too remote controlled, we often know what is going to happen, lack of suspense. Another side that I don't really like are the women who approach the mc (not all of them of course, otherwise I will have quit a long time ago), it may only be me but they lose their charm, they just become "a woman who follows the mc" and lose a bit of their personality, something that is often found in other novels of the same genre. Ah yes also lack of "intelligent" enemies I find for the moment. For me the mc would never have been able to develop his city so far with a good villain. Otherwise I recommend it if you manage to pass the coincidences a little too big in my opinion. A fairly unique novel in which the mc is not the center of everything.