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An enjoyable tale about a MC who inherits a spatial kingdom. With this inheritance, Minos must help human kind get stronger for some unknown powerhouse enemies. Due to the inheritance and other things, Minos is knocked into a coma for 6 years. When he awakens, he learns the land that should have been his is snatched by a powerful noble family. He is essentially banished to Dry City, a barren place he now must rule. Minos has numerous obstacles to overcome, including catching up to his peers cultivation levels, raising his land to hospitable and prosperous levels, annihilate his rivals and raise the humans overall strength. Pros: grammar is ok, rules set in this world do not change on writer’s whim, clear character progression, exciting fight scenes, nice slice of life moments. This is an actual kingdom building novel. MC works hard for his people, strengthens them and delegates tasks. Mino doesn’t spare anyone who messes with him & his —beautiful women included. Cons: romance is not a thing so far. Writer is upfront from the beginning so you don’t go into this thinking of a traditional h***m. Women are with men, women and dogs down the street. Think one night-stands & keep that mindset. Depending on what you like, this could be a pro or con. Tags don’t warn you, but this has inc**t & ff. Sometimes the pace is too slow and it gets boring reading about the mundane day to day life, but I guess it’s just part of world building/background. Conclusion:9/10, I give this the Kanye stamp of approval.

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The Rise of the Black Plain

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Thanks for the review. As for whoever reads this here, just to make it clear, this last part that he put in the cons refers to something that happened with secondary characters and not with the MC himself. Of the 370 chapters posted, these things only happen on about four occasions, so I'm not going to tag something that can't even be considered secondary in the story. And there are also two warnings in two chapters, and even without such a thing, you can tell what would happen by the chapter title and the context of the previous chapters. Anyway, just to be clear, the story is not focused on this controversial side. The MC of this story will never have relationships with people related to him!