Review Detail of Ankit_Deokuliar in The Rise of the Black Plain
Review detail
Before thinking whether to read the novel or not just read the first chapter on author thought. The storyline and plot is surprisingly detailed and the author managed to write a story where the world doesn't revolve around MC but it's not a multiple POV type story. (Good for me) All major encounters with other characters are logical and they don't just pop out of nowhere just because the plot demands it...they are always given a little background which makes them alive and believable.... except MC's mother side of family. but I guess that will be revealed later. Side characters appear and leave logically and not because of random plot. The story has 2-3 cliche parts but the execution and results are very different from the normal...(*spoiler- there is tournaments and mc finding rare spirit beast and a young master goes after the MC for he talked to his supposed wife/girl...but in a totally different way*) Otherwise this story is kingdom building in a poor abandoned land...mc has his OP inheritance but doesn't use hack techniques to improve his land but simply expensive very scarce resources which any normal lord will spend only on himself. In short the kingdom building is realistic too, compared to other novels where mc is either reincarnation from future or from earth... Another thing in novel you will find interesting is the cultivation system and the structure of cultivation world in general. the difference between different states of cultivation is not insurmountable and those in the same stages is even more so... atleast in the starting and mid stages...this makes it interesting as just having higher cultivation doesn't mean sure victory..it comes down to how good their techniques are and thier teamwork.... This is refreshing after reading so many one man army MCs... The world-building in general is great the noble families, the commoners they act differently than the stereotype established in other novels...like nobles are oppressive and common men are miserable and only the mc saves them and they will grateful to eternity. well that's it ..I ranted a lot .... author keep up the good work, I generally don't start reading new novels unless they have 300+ chapters coz this site has given me many heartbreaks but I changed my mind after reading your first chapter so don't you dare disappoint me by dropping it.
The Rise of the Black Plain
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If what you said is true, then I'm all of reading this. I love Kingdom building novels... and they're extremely rare. I've tried Lord's Empire from many good reviews, but I've dropped it because the MC is too much of a psychopath to me. Based on what you said, I think that the MC is not evil and actually helps people, which is more wholesome to read. And your opinion about troupes are sooo true. A lot of novels have Nobles (almost all of them) being oppressive, church members as being evil and kill anyone not agreeing with their doctrines, Devils painted as saints, etc... Seriously. It's getting toi cringy, and the worst one is edgy/emo/loner/cold/antisocial MCs. Almost all of the novels have them. The "I only care about my loved ones" sentence is getting too overused.
I agree that loner MC trend is getting a bit boring...and I liked how the MC is not straight away loner after getting the inheritance... Well even for those who don't like hero type MC, they will enjoy this.... In starting the mc appears to be like merciful MC who protect weak and gives them power but in the latest chapter - Evolution (not going to spoil) it was revealed why he is helping low talent people....not because he has upright character or can't watch the survival of the fittest but actually a genuine neutral reason (neither evil nor good) he is just doing it further his cause. It is rather fresh type of MC character in the webnovels....but sadly the novel doesn't receive much attention...
DripItachi:If what you said is true, then I'm all of reading this. I love Kingdom building novels... and they're extremely rare. I've tried Lord's Empire from many good reviews, but I've dropped it because the MC is too much of a psychopath to me. Based on what you said, I think that the MC is not evil and actually helps people, which is more wholesome to read. And your opinion about troupes are sooo true. A lot of novels have Nobles (almost all of them) being oppressive, church members as being evil and kill anyone not agreeing with their doctrines, Devils painted as saints, etc... Seriously. It's getting toi cringy, and the worst one is edgy/emo/loner/cold/antisocial MCs. Almost all of the novels have them. The "I only care about my loved ones" sentence is getting too overused.
So true. All those anti-social MCs, who missunderstand girls and intentions and all the time are getting annoying
DripItachi:If what you said is true, then I'm all of reading this. I love Kingdom building novels... and they're extremely rare. I've tried Lord's Empire from many good reviews, but I've dropped it because the MC is too much of a psychopath to me. Based on what you said, I think that the MC is not evil and actually helps people, which is more wholesome to read. And your opinion about troupes are sooo true. A lot of novels have Nobles (almost all of them) being oppressive, church members as being evil and kill anyone not agreeing with their doctrines, Devils painted as saints, etc... Seriously. It's getting toi cringy, and the worst one is edgy/emo/loner/cold/antisocial MCs. Almost all of the novels have them. The "I only care about my loved ones" sentence is getting too overused.
DripItachi:If what you said is true, then I'm all of reading this. I love Kingdom building novels... and they're extremely rare. I've tried Lord's Empire from many good reviews, but I've dropped it because the MC is too much of a psychopath to me. Based on what you said, I think that the MC is not evil and actually helps people, which is more wholesome to read. And your opinion about troupes are sooo true. A lot of novels have Nobles (almost all of them) being oppressive, church members as being evil and kill anyone not agreeing with their doctrines, Devils painted as saints, etc... Seriously. It's getting toi cringy, and the worst one is edgy/emo/loner/cold/antisocial MCs. Almost all of the novels have them. The "I only care about my loved ones" sentence is getting too overused.
Love this review. I just stumbled onto this novel and was curious what to expect (or even if Iâd start reading); you laid everything out in a way to easily build our own expectations without giving deep spoilers to the story itself. Author can expect a new reader to have begun following them with me (pending first chapter). Looking forward to the story. đ
