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CriticalReader
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Would have been decent if it weren't for the following: The retconning of character personalities and thus invalidating previous character development. Plot ?? It is not there with mc abandoning his goals and ideas, all to create pointless drama... in a pointless bid to attract new readers. World building is outright abandoned what happened to the creation myth of the universe... what with all the chapters dedicated to it... unfortunately the author writes as if it was never supposed to be relevant... so then where is the world building ??? Pacing is very poor with dozens of chapters of dedicated to the world building only to be abandoned, while important details take barely a chapter to introduce without any build up. You can rate the novel highly for being better than majority of the garbage on this site but if you look closely you'll see it is barely decent. Overall mediocre, deceptive(retconning), pretentious (goes from subtle story telling to attention-seeking drama), convoluted(the main theme changes more than 3 times) and aimless(story conclusion is rushed). You can definitely find better novels on this site... no need to be desperate enough to settle for this travesty.

Into the void [ITV]

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