Review Detail of VictorRust2410 in Reincarnated as Poseidon

A fanfic with a lot of potential but suffering from an inexperienced author. the starting chapters could be a bit boring and immaturish, especially for someone who've already read PJ series. Our MCs presence doesn't change anything much and you might get frustrated by how passive he seems. But the fic really takes off after Kronos's death. The mc starts changing things and differs from canon Poseidon. this is where i felt like i was finally reading about a SI posiedon changing the future instead of history just repeating itself without any changes. it improves a lot as a fic when si starts making waves. In short i like this fic and would be following its progress closely. I would've loved to give it a 4-4.5 but unfortunately that would be a false review. as i said earlier, the author is inexperienced and doesn't seem like a native English speaker and you can see that in the writing. it's still better than most of the crap on this site. Plus he can only improve as he gets experienced. all in all, not a masterpiece by any rights but still a great attempt at writing and a fanfic with a lot of potential and room for improvement. hopefully it won't be dropped.