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I love this novel, I mean I love it so much as the parasite I am and have used only fast passes up to chap 200. So Unlike other review in here I can tell you that like they said the Mc becomes dumb, but it’s dumb that would kinda be when you get an all knowing fairy. When it combat though he regains that focus as well as any time he ‘believes’ he requires it. Much like the gear shifting of decent trained sport teams. He downgrads himself to the situation, which is more human. In my opinion this story is good very good. If the author tho was to make another story I would suggest that back off a little with the game elements. The game elements of the later chapters give the rigid and focused story deve lopment of him becoming stronger and etc. But it is also a double edge sword that leaves little flexibility for adding side stories or fan’s fantasies. It hurts the world development in many ways. Any small inconsistencies between game elements and reincarnation story leads to plot holes, major one being that bakery. But this could be author bringing in the game industry’s biggest flaw to make it more ‘realistic’, but I personally don’t think it fits. Other than that I love this story. I hate the current alter ego part though ;)

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Thank you for your review :)