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Hey, love this story so far. The detail everything has is unreal. when I read, (may be crazy) but I can imagine myself in the MC's place and the character development is amazing. And I have a question but you don't have to answer. I was wondering if anything between Red Death and Storm Wind(Jack) will happen. like will they be close friends, or start dating each other? Anyways great work. and can't wait to read the next chapters tomorrow.
Second World
UnrivaledArcaner
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Thank you for the review. I will have the relationship develops, but it won't be the core of the story, might still be a long time in developing. Also, if you remember there is another possible girl who I mentioned (when he is talking to paytowin). So which relationship Jack ends up with, still up in the air. Can possibly a different girl altogether :)
Yeah, either way tho I love the story so far. Whoever you chose for him to be with, I'll support it the whole way.. And even if it takes 400 more chapters to see development I wouldn't mind. Anyways keep up the great work.
UnrivaledArcaner:Thank you for the review. I will have the relationship develops, but it won't be the core of the story, might still be a long time in developing. Also, if you remember there is another possible girl who I mentioned (when he is talking to paytowin). So which relationship Jack ends up with, still up in the air. Can possibly a different girl altogether :)