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(quick side note, updating stability shouldn't be an option for the review because I just found the story and I have absolutely no if it's good so I just put a 5 star since I like the story) ANYWAYS, I love this novel. the only 4 star rating I'll give is on the writing quality because there are spelling/grammar errors even up to the current chapters (340+ish). this, however, isn't a big deal because it's a good story. the mc isn't super op, making sure there's a bit of suspense and drama in each situation. Though, the author does go a bit too overboard with the giant battles. The mc isn't not all-powerful, he shouldn't solo a thousand man battle the way he does with his current skills. 400+ kill count (demon of crestfall plain arc) just seems like a lot, though it's easier to swallow at such a low level in the story line. I almost stopped before even getting started when I read a review where someone said the fairy ruins the story but she actually made things more interesting. I'm not a fan that the mc received such an OP gift but it at least makes a bit if sense as opposed to other versions of the same trope. Even up to the latest chapter I enjoy the story which is hard since even on the 2000 plus chapter novels I can barely get through 10% of them without feeling either disgusted or bored. The mc may have some OP skills but he's not overly reliant on them and the author does end up nerfing them a bit throughout the story, but a bit of OP is acceptable in these types of stories. Please continue with the novel Author, maybe let him have a bit of romance so he doesn't turn incel later on? Would be a nice change of pace! JackxPeniel otp!

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