Review Detail of Charan56 in REBIRTH IN AGAINST THE GODS (AN ATG FAN FIC)
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The story flow is so good that I didn't know when I just completed reading the 3 chapters. I will re-review this work after the author releases sufficient chapters. But for the ones currently present, it kinda gives a new vibe to read an ATG fanfic like this. Looking forward to seeing how the interactions between the MC and others going to be. Till now, it was only MC talking, training, and all. Can it keep fellow readers invested in it? Time is what answers it. It's challenging to write an MC who knows the value of the relationship. And it's even more challenging when MC already knows the events which happen in the timeline. It more or less looks manipulative. I hope this fanfic is set to deliver an experience with none of that. And set a new standard for the fanfics that are to come. From your reader.
REBIRTH IN AGAINST THE GODS (AN ATG FAN FIC)
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I'm afraid it is not really what you may think, It is different from most stories, but something feels wrong. The story flow is okay when it comes to the Authors own writing, but they have placed original content from the story into their work because they are too lazy to write out the scene in their own words.
I only copied original content when introducing Female leads. I don't know how to describe their appearance in my own words. So, I copied it.
TOFIE:I'm afraid it is not really what you may think, It is different from most stories, but something feels wrong. The story flow is okay when it comes to the Authors own writing, but they have placed original content from the story into their work because they are too lazy to write out the scene in their own words.
the_last_shadow:I only copied original content when introducing Female leads. I don't know how to describe their appearance in my own words. So, I copied it.
TOFIE:You can use the manga as a reference for what they look like
I only read 3 chaps and wrote a review only of my personal opinion. For most of it, I wanted to encourage the author to write more chapters. It's okay if you don't share the same opinion as me. In case, you reviewed it, can I ask how much the author paid you? I don't. Just write your review and be done with it.
Skepparn:how much did the author pay you to leave such a wrong review? Nothing you said actually is true lmao