Review Detail of Lackada1sical in Journey Into One Piece

Evaluation: Above Average WQ: Several noticeable gramm errors & inconsistencies, however, author-san is improving on it as it goes on. A well thought storyline, plus long chapters. 4/5 SD: With an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. This is a pre-cannon storyline which is quite good as author-san is building his own story. 5/5 CD: MC is not dependent (Mythical Zoan/logia lightning/Fenrir) on his DF as he also uses his foreknowledge of OP-verse plus his high intelect and out of the box strats' which help him overcome the schemes and plot of OP-verse. MC has a chaotic-neutral persona which is apt on OP-verse. 5/5 US: Author-san must've encountered the well known disease of a mental/writer's block. 3/5 WB: Different DF were used/discussed which is good. Lack of adventure/exploration of other islands. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD