Review Detail of Sir_Leonard in Adventum Canis

Hey! Author here! I'm gonna be honest and tell you that this is just a personal hobby of mine, so updates are pretty loose. English isn't my main language, and certainly I have no originality, so I honestly don't think this deserves a 5 star. Still, I would love to see you telling me how to improve! And who knows? Maybe I will take this more seriously.