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Review Detail of Crimson78 in Mark of the Destined Princess

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Crimson78
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This is just an awesome book!!! It is a must read. It has suspense, mystery, adventure and twists and turns! Though English seems to be the second language of the author,so there may be times when you can't understand it. But don't put it down! It'll get better! Trust me!

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Mark of the Destined Princess

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htiaFFA
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Thank you for the review and support as well as saying it was a must read one. I appreciate it😊🤗

Crimson78
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Saying as it is! If you don't mind can I give you some advice. Don't use pronoun. if there are 10 people in a scene we're not gonna underage which 'he' you're referring to. instead use names or adjectives(eg brown haired man, blue robed, fat, skinny, scarred etc.

Crimson78
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Crimson78:Saying as it is! If you don't mind can I give you some advice. Don't use pronoun. if there are 10 people in a scene we're not gonna underage which 'he' you're referring to. instead use names or adjectives(eg brown haired man, blue robed, fat, skinny, scarred etc.
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Noted😊

Crimson78:Saying as it is! If you don't mind can I give you some advice. Don't use pronoun. if there are 10 people in a scene we're not gonna underage which 'he' you're referring to. instead use names or adjectives(eg brown haired man, blue robed, fat, skinny, scarred etc.