Review Detail of noobageddon_ in WARLOCK OF THE MAGUS WORLD FAN FICTION

The first new dozen of chapter is really good. The new world he create is also good. The problem with that is he start it with 2 chapter of a somewhat info damp. Its good and all but that info damp is focus on something thats really unnecessary and something we dont care about. I stop reading till there and come back again after many months. I forgot what those 2 chap contain and im keeping up with the story. Lol so those chap are really just junk. Another problem is that author tend to overly explain/discribe something to the point he insert it in a middle of some thing that it destroyed the mood and vibes of it. The worst part is that explinatuon is a 3-5 paragraph thats really unnecessary or some thing he already explain. Theres also some chap thats 20% plot and 80% overly description or explinatuon of something. Its good and all if... ‘if’ the info your feeding is new, but no!! Its an old stuff that he already said a new chap back or last chap or even in the chapter thats hs it. He over did it even if its unnecessary and readers can just understood it with common sense. Theres also some paragraph thats has the same meaning but different wording. Not even a new info added and worst those paragraphs are long. Theres also one time where the author copy past a paragraph in 3 chapters. Like the story is good and all, but the explination/description? 🤢🤢 Old info thats recycle to make the chapter longer. Not to mention the side char. Author reintroduce a char again for 4-5 chap then use them one last time the throw them away. I mean why bother having a 4-5 chapter for those char when youll throw them a few chap later? For more chapters? Just make a mc’s interaction with his subject. It will make the side char alive and not just an object that will talk when you need them. Its not like this in your earlier chap. It become like this when you start your beast world arc. What happen? Is it because of p.a.t.r.e.o.n?? I think a good story bring more money than a long story. What a waste.